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Good Help is Hard to Find
by Gretchen Pferdchen

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Comment by ashley on 03/06/14
nice shortie !

Comment by julih on 12/24/12
intresting short story

Comment by Jaylin on 12/12/11
Begun, the great inetrent education has.

Comment by ashley on 09/23/10
a real tough master!!!

Comment by Mistress Meredith on 01/19/09
Excellent, Mistress Gretchen. I applaud your insistance that your maids, cynetta and greta comply with your every whim and desire. As you can see from my maid priscilla ann's comments, I too insist on perfection and am quick to correct my little sissy maid at the drop of a maid's frilly cap, so to speak. Well done. I do hope you will share more with us in the future.

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 02/21/08
Wonderful short tale. Mistress is quite the demanding one, which I am sure keeps Cynetta and Greta on their toes. My Mistress is also quite demanding and expecting of perfection. It is nice to know I'm not alone when the riding crop slashes the backs of my thighs just above the lacey tops of my nylon stockings and ruffled panty clad buns. Thank you for a great little story.

Comment by julie j on 06/04/05
an intresting short story need a lot more added to it and taken to further extremes very soft going but intresting this is my 2nd read of this

Comment by julie j on 07/02/04
i agree with julie the story needs more filing out and explanation

Comment by julie on 03/31/03
an interesting story but needs a lot more filling out with details about who you are and how this situation occured

Comment by Estri Wassermann on 10/14/01
A very nice story, Gretchen. I'll very much be looking forward to chapter 2.
Keep up the good work.

Estri



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