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The Good Ship Venus
by Hypatia

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Comment by Tilly on 12/13/11
When you think about it, that's got to be the right aneswr.

Comment by Nellie D on 07/30/02
A dark story that ends with a bright note amongst the sadness. Set in the not too distant future, it displays the same short comings in human nature that we currently see. A darkness within society that most try to deny.

A thought provoking story that may bring tears at the end.

Thank you Hypatia.

Comment by Nomad on 07/29/02
A very good reminder of how every one has feet of clay. We like to think we (humans) have come so far, but the howling animal is still there just beneath the surface, waiting for a tear in its silk prison to allow escape.

I shiver as the darkness in your story strikes echos within me, and I realize how empty I am.

Comment by Rose2 on 07/28/02
   This was not a happy story but a true drama.  You brought us where few have dared.  The madness the mind can create when all options lead to nowhere.

Comment by Rose2 on 07/28/02
   This was not a happy story but a true drama.  You brought us where few have dared.  The madness the mind can create when all options lead to nowhere.



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