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Goth Girl
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Comment by juliej on 08/15/06
an interesting theme for a story goth it went down well and was enjoyable well worth the read more please Comment by Jade on 02/22/06 Do you need help with writing the story or are you just busy? Cause I see people asking for this to continue I know you can add me to that list of people who are waiting for the next part though yes the wait to have a story posted is long it still would be nice to get the next part please write and send if you havn't yet. Comment by xtreamstinger on 07/21/05 please continue this story Comment by Drusilla on 01/01/05 Please continue with the story. Comment by Ashley on 11/22/04 Please Continue this Story. I am dying to more Comment by Rena on 08/23/04 I love this story it is going pretty well Though not everyone who wears a goth style wears or dyes ther hair differnt colors nor do they always wear black or even the dark make up. But still a good story please keep it coming! Comment by jonhy on 07/24/04 Thats a good story im inringue to see the next part of it. I love goth and I would love to be that guy. Continue the good work. Your making wish I had a goth girl next door. Comment by Mary on 07/24/04 Could be a good story, but please proof read your story before posting... Good luck Comment by Betty on 07/24/04 Can't wait for the next parts. Wonderful beginning in parts 1 & 2. Comment by tanyalynn on 07/24/04 just read parts 1&2 at the same time and i am enjoying the story although Im not into goth. You have the same problem I do with a proofreader, but keep up the story- I can hardly wait for what's next. Comment by julie j on 07/09/04 a good start to what is looking like a great story im intreigued to read what happens next and if he gets caught out way to go Comment by Mike on 07/07/04 has lots of charm. WOuld be more believable however if he used something like the medallion of Zolu to turn into her since people who know her think he's her. ANyway keep writing. Comment by Guess Who on 07/06/04 You need to more editing and proofreading. Lots of typos and bad grammar. Comment by Becca on 07/05/04 Excellent, we want more !!!! |
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