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The Government Program
by Jennifer Allison

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Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19
QFkjdy Super-Duper site! I am loving it!! Will come back again. I am taking your feeds also

Comment by online business on 09/13/13
LZeEct wow, awesome article post.Much thanks again. Cool.

Comment by Nook on 12/12/11
A piece of erudition unilke any other!

Comment by Aleesha on 10/16/10
Quite a differene type of story and although good I have to agree with your other readers. I think it is a fact though if teengre men/bpys or even older men were coerced into wearing womens clothing they would be wrapped because womens clothing is so much of a turn on and so much sexier than mens clothing. Well done though.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 04/30/05
What happened to following the rules and the secret ballot?  The parents cheat by not abiding by the all or nothing agreement and then by trying to find out who voted no.  What did they do to those who voted no?  Judging by the ethics displayed by the adults, they probably forced them into oppositesexhood.

Would the humongous breasts, the 6" heels, and the forced sex have been a part of the real program if everyone had voted yes, or were they just part of dean's fantasy?  Seems like they wanted to create teen sluts rather than young ladies.

Comment by silk on 01/25/02
the story idea was interesting but i think it was porly exicuted. another thing is you seem to have a fasination with extreamly large brests i think you should keep it under dd size espesaly when talking about 17 18 year old kids. as well as the 6 inch heals. most gg's i know rarly ever wher aney thing above a 2 1/2" heal.

Comment by jill p. koch on 10/20/01
I love it. I hope you can wrote some more.

Comment by Anon on 10/17/01
Good story idea but written in a poor fashion. Could have been much better if kept at an R rating or such and end of story expanded on.

Ending was rushed and with language used makes author appear to have run out of ideas and to make up for it just threw in sex scenes

Comment by Miss Danielle on 10/16/01
I loved it! Very kinky and good to see a story set for teenagers. Keep it up!



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