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Graduation Day (and Beyond)
by Janis Elizabeth

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Comment by wordsmith on 12/17/10
Like what all the others say....YOUR stories are wonderful and great to read.....please...please...please write more.
YOU are a TREASURE for sure.
Hope to make contact again someday.
HUGS   LOVE....and thanks

Comment by Annie on 05/08/10
dear Janis i simply adored your story and could not stop reading it !!! i found myself actually feeling  it was happening to me (sigh)  wishful thinking ! i can't wait to read some more chapters. (hugs and kisses) Annie4sur

Comment by sundrop on 12/28/09
I love your stories and have been captivated by this lovely story here. It needs to be finished. I hope you find the time and the muse to do it. Janet needs to finish school and her and Megan have to go to college and get married.

Comment by Jeri on 06/10/09
Where is part 5?  Start again, you can do it.

Comment by rone welles on 04/09/09
 Ahh  the story is nice and sweet  BUT not complete

the talent is there and story is good  and the readers are waiting

kissy  kissy  please  more   ,,,, Rone xoxoxo


Comment by Me on 03/22/08
"Mom immediately noticed the feminine bulge in Janet's panties..."

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Comment by Janice Lynn on 06/04/07
Loved your all your stories and I found Janet's story exceptional. I do look forward to the next chapters to see how Janet, Megan, their Moms do. TA for now, Jan :)

Comment by Joan on 08/22/06
I really think that dear Janis Elizabeth's stories is very
loverly and romantic novel. I have a dream. Just I really hope to
read Janis Elizabeth's lovely stories about lingerie shop and shopping episode......



Comment by rachelanne on 07/23/06
This is a very lovely and touching story.  I hope it contiunes and I am sure the future parts will be equally charming

Comment by Nist on 07/21/06
I have had the chance to read others of your stories and have really enjoyed them, but this one. I'm sorry, while the standard of writing is above average, the actual story has no, well story, its boring, its flat and it feels like it is just a vehicle for your own sexual fetishes.

A bit more character development wouldn't be a miss.


Comment by Shirley on 07/17/06
How refreshing to have such nice stories to read.  I enjoy them so much.  More please...soon.

Comment by Priscilla on 07/14/06
Another tour de force, Janis Elizabeth. i just adore your stories; they are so fresh and enjoyable, nothing nasty in them, just the pleasure of a mother and daughter/son in transition. More and more, please



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