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The Grass is Greener
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by june on 05/09/08
It would take a pretty stuped mother not to be happy with a son like that.

Comment by Antonia on 03/28/08
Rather difficult to understand how the mother got the drugs for these young children.  It must still be grossly illegal to do anything like this, even in the never-never land where you seem to live most of the time.
I also had the greatest difficulty in places to translate what you typed into words which I could read and understand.  Don't you ever spellcheck or edit your own work ?

Comment by Danielle on 05/26/06
Paul,
    I am very confused by your desire to punish good boys. What ever is wrong with wanting to help out Mom!? This is a mothers's dream come true to have a sensitive, caring son rather than an egomaniacal testosterone driven hooligan. Why do you consider this boy to be BAD and in need of punishment?

    I am very confused!!!!!



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