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PwXH9z I decided to help and sent a post to the social  bookmarks. I hope to raise it in popularity!!.... Comment by Lady Nadja on 07/25/07 Yes, I hope Amy gets what She deserves: total, craven obedience! Comment by Tiffany on 05/23/07 while i like most of your stories these kind disturb me and just make me pissed off. It would be a great story if it had a happy ending if after the final Transformation of Julia that Amy's plan backfires and Katie's love for Ken is able to be realized she leaves him and since Katie's commands are able to be received by Julia that it breaks the spell over Julia and ken regains control but Julia is mixed in with him. Katie and Ken then could devise a plan to get back at amy and she gets what she finally deserves. Comment by cindi247 on 06/20/06 How I wish it had been Amy who had shown me the way. My Joanne changed my life and now has left me adrift on a sea of memory. Comment by Sissy Baby Paula on 01/09/06 Wow! A dark tale well written. The only snags I can see is why it was necessary to turn Ken into Julia (discounting the need for a maid and revenge) as a break up could have been orcestrated and the other question is what happens after the honeymoon? Legally Katie and Ken are a married couple and both their families think so. Someone would propably make them see a shrink and Amy's influence might come out. And I also agree with the previous comment that Amy is one sick lady. Comment by Reviewer #65 on 01/02/06 I'm more a fan of magic transformations, as opposed to the idea of mind control to enforce surgical transformation, but that's personal taste. Comment by Calamariee on 01/01/06 Nicely done, once again, you use an interesting formula for weaving your tales... |
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