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Guilty As Charged
by Dave Hicks

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Comment by Gracelyn on 12/13/11
Yup, that'll do it. You have my appcreiaiton.

Comment by Pippa K. on 06/30/04
A wonderful little sci-fi story.  Somehow, the work of Stansislav Lem comes to mind.

Comment by Briar Lorenz on 02/06/03
What a wonderful future world you have created a  vision of !  I like the humour.  As previous commentor said, you have a nice style to.  Thanks for sharing this with us.  Hugs,

Briar

Comment by Cai on 02/06/03
"It amazes me sometimes, the trouble a guy has to go to these days, just to get a dinner date with an attractive woman."

I read this story fairly quickly, yet this last line, cause me to break out into a very broad smile and a belly laugh or more..

A very nicely told tale of going about to get what you want.  Very good descriptive phrasing,  I am not an english teacher (Thanks heavens for small miracles).

I have enjoyed your stories, keep a smile handy,  that makes them all the more fun to read.  
Thanks.




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