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Half-Sisters Too
by Hebe Dotson

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Comment by nicole on 03/25/05
very enjoyable stories half brother/sister no sex makes it more interesting.thanks

Comment by Andrea Foster on 04/17/03
This is a nice story, told straight down the middle. Once again siblings who obviously like each other (even the dragon-lady elder sister), and boys who dress as girls simply because they want to (how original is that?) and enjoy it.

Great fun. I wonder what'll happen if Amanda wakes up to the fact that she's got TWO new little sisters....

Comment by Nellie D on 04/17/03
The sequel is very good and enjoyable. There is nothing mean or degrading in it. Just the boys having fun.

Thank you Hebe

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