Good story but the 'nit' picker in me brings out one criticism which applies to most of the authors in Crystals stories. Many groups of words in the English language sound the same but are spelled differently and have different meanings, for example, To, Too and Two, or There, Their and They're. One author even wrote about going 'up stares' to bed ! Of course, depending upon their state of dress, maybe there may have been a reason for some stares. If you cannot afford the services of a qualified editor, would you please learn these differences and try to use the appropriate word.

Sweet story.  Thanks!

Dear Teddie,
I just recently found your stories on Crystals Site. My second read offering was "Halle".  It was absolutely delicious and sensuous...absolutely lovely and so well written. It brought such delightful feeling to me. I look forward to more of your stories in the future.  Are there any more sites for your writtings?
Hugs and more,
Angela

"That's the story of my Halle. Hope you enjoyed it."

Mmmmm... smooth, sweet, spicy, and delicious, like a best quality real vanilla ice cream topped with peppermint candies.

Thank you.  I can't really add to what has been already said about this moving story.  I have read similar plots on previous occasions but nowhere near as well crafted as this.

A simply wonderful sentimental story of true love and respect for others.  Only wish it was longer.  thanks

This is a wonderful story. It made me cry a few times - when Halle cried. Halle's emotions seem so like me - although I dont have her wonderful body - I'm just a "wee lass" - just 5' 15" LOL.
Please continue the story it is great to read about the human side of trans living. Stories like this will help open the eyes of people to see LGBT folk as people with feelings - that love and need love.

You are truly a gifted writer you know how to pick up from where you lfet off and you end the parts at very good points in the story so you can continue to work on the next area.  I hope there will be at least 10 parts to this story, and even if that is not possible It would be a site to see this story as a book being sold in a book store!  I do believe you have found your Calling and who knows may be this could turn into a series!

This is a very excellent story, and although you ended it at a good point in the story I was disappointed that it had to end there.  I would love to see this continued, for the simple fact that you are touching a lot of areas that a small few touch on as well!

What a wonderful and sensitive approach to a relationship.  Please continue your good work.

Absolutely one of my favorites!  I can't wait to read the next installment.  I just love that you are telling this from Terrie's viewpoint.  You realize the visual aspects perfectly.  I just finished reading "She's not there - a life in two genders" by Jennifer F. Boylan, a creative writing professor at Colby College, and your story reminded me a lot of her true-life story.  (I highly recommend the book, by the way.)  Anyway, I want to hear more about Halle's transition to female professor.  I sense that the best is yet to gome.  Thank you so much for sharing this intimate portrait with us.

Love,
Sheryl S.