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Halloween 2004
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Early June on 06/20/05
(shudder)  Remind me not to go camping with you.  That is scary. YOu carried the angst and the transformations off in a way to make me feel as though I were living the night. It does hold attention and does create a mood.  I personally think the witches council ought to have a ew words with this coven.  They do seem a little overly vindictive.  They meted out punishments, but what about justice?
After the transformation to Paulina, I had guessed they would recruit Paulina to their coven. but that wasn't in your script.  I also had thought, that maybe, the six boys would wake up the next day and live the weekend as sentenced. That when they went home Sunday night, they would slowly recover and then be humble bumbles, reformed and returned to their original but chastised form.
  Another good job by a good writer.  Thank you for sharing this Halloween tale with us.












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