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Halloween 2006
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Early June on 02/08/07
I am one of your biggest fans.  I like almost everything you post.  I enjoyed this one up to the end.  I am puzzled as to what may have caused the physical and mental switching of our two protagonists.
This is not a complaint, just confusion.  Otherwise the story was great, as usual.

Comment by suna on 01/25/07
I've never said anything like this before... I'd like to enjoy your stories, I've read quite a few not just the new ones... but I can't get past how clinical they sound.  It is like reading a how-to technical manual.  Events take place and the characters just wander along. I just can't feel anything for the characters they all seem so wooden.

I'm really sory for how that sounds, the stories are so close to good and I'm not a writer so I don't know how to better explain.  Maybe you see what I do. Best wishes for future stories.




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