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The Halloween Ride of Paul(a) Revere
by Jezzi Belle Stewart

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Comment by julie j on 08/03/04
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Comment by maggiethekitten on 03/28/04
Huggles Jezzi Belle

Awwwwww....dats soooo...cute.  I really really loved it.  Such an imigination!  I smiled from beginning to end on that ride.  Thanks for sharing it was such a daybrightener.  Your fan and friend,

maggie da kitten

Comment by Jane Hudson on 03/24/04
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Comment by jimmyinwhite on 03/23/04
i love the halloween ride of paula. i hope that she gets to keep allie & joan as girlfriends. will you be telling us about the girls school life after the ride?



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