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Hammerson House
by Zedd

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Comment by Pamela on 05/25/13
Wow!  I read all your writings and this one is the very best.  Honestly, I would die to live something like that.  Well written, a lot of images for imagination, succulent generated ambiences and direct wording.  Kudos Zedd.

Only the best for you and all the ones you care.

Pamela
xx


Comment by Jesus on 01/06/13
Hot damn, looking pretty ufseul buddy.

Comment by Lurker on 04/23/06
I never was really interested in these stories but yours are truly magnificent.

It is a shame though, you seem to have vanished, hope you return soon.

Comment by Unknown but thankful on 10/29/05
I liked your story alot usually i never thought about type of fantasy but i liked it thanks to you.

Comment by Dixie on 01/30/01
I loved your little story,I hope to read more of the changes the house and clothes make.Here's a possible help...how about the clothes seemingly coming to life and dressing him,oops I mean her,or perhaps it's his Aunt's ghost doing it all.
  One never knows does one? Anyway I liked your story keep up the good work,I hope to read more of itand that it's as good as this one is.              

                         Dixie

Comment by Paula Jutras on 01/30/01
quite an interesting magicial ring story. Well done at how you had the changes come piece by piece instead of all at once.



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