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Hansel and Grettle, A Loli Fairytale
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Comment by Sir Earle on 06/30/05
Ole ! Sarah Lynn , allow me to genuflect before a nonpareil stoyteller. Emily was the portent of growing skills . with " Hansel and Gretel " You have arrived. A wonderful story. Consider " better are the blows of a friend than the false kisses of an enemy ". - Thomas a' Becket. Comment by Geoff on 06/29/05 I read your other story 'Emma', and felt that it was well written, but lacked any direction and was rather a story about nice people who did very little of interest. Comment by TrinaC on 06/28/05 I almost didn't read this. I assumed, and like most times when I do that I was wrong. Neat story, well written, some grammar and minor spelling errors. A good read and I'll be looking to you for more good reads. Comment by Sarah Bayen on 06/27/05
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