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Comment by marcus on 11/28/06
No matter how convoluted the plot it all boils down to the same old: stupid, pathetic husband and nasty, hateful wife. Comment by Jillmi on 12/05/04 This story reminds why Vickie Tern is 'the' favorite of many. What appears to be a simple story of betrayal and consequences, becomes a complex study of marriage. The reader is asked to define love and loyalty. Is the hero being manipulated or motivated? |
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