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Happy Ending
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Jorge Arbusto on 12/12/20
To get what you want, you have to give in a little
Comment by juliej on 03/09/06
happy ending what a good way to end the story everyone got what they wanted its another great story well done &thankyou
Comment by SassySue on 01/29/05
I agree with Early June: WOW! WOW! WOW!

Nice to see a story that lived up to its title of "Happy Ending";   the type of situation most heterosexual cross-dressers can only dream of.

I really liked the way you laid out the story and explained the motivation of the characters and how in the end the husband and wife each got what they wanted.

Thanks for a great story.

SS

Comment by Early June on 11/05/04
Wow! Jennifer, you outdid yourself.  This was a wonderful story, fast paced and full of twists.  The wife was smart. the characters were true to life, and the plot was believable. Thank you for another fine Tale. I look forward to them.
Comment by Wannabe Ginger on 11/05/04
Hi, Jennifer!
I've read a lot of your previous stories and like the pace of the a lot.  This one is very true to life and could be everyone's dream outcome!  (Certainly hasn't been mine yet - got 'so far'.... undies,  make-up but it all went pear-shaped;  back to the first chapter of your story.

I'm just writing my first story - a serial really  - and it's more about my particular love.. hair, (and make-up too)   Have you dealt with hair a great deal iinany other story?  If not could you write one?  Love  Ginger


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