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Harassment
by Margaret Jeanette

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Comment by Silvia     (from Brazil) on 10/25/09
Ok, this story isn't so bad!
Bill has agreed with his punishment, and this make things different than to be forced to do what he did!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by juliej on 12/27/07
as per my previous comments

Comment by juliej on 09/17/04
the acceptance by bill is quite amazing the way it happened & how he took it advancement in the job as well he has done well it makes you wonder how long his wife will take it before she has had enough their could be storm clouds ahead in time it would be intresting to read well done another graet story

Comment by Early June on 07/23/04
Another fun tale.  Perhaps the acceptance, by each and everyone, was a little too easy.  In the real world, There is much more resistance to diference, both by males and females.  I like the premise and the conlusion. A happy story.


Comment by leah on 07/22/04
I couldn't be more pleased with the way this story finishes, BUT I have to ask myself repeatedly, Just what universe are we in these days? With how nice everyone is, this must be just one step shy of Eden or Heaven.

Maybe getting Bill into skirts should have been a tad more complicated; for instance, I never did buy your resolution of how he treated the young women. On the other hand, having your job rest on a knife-edge would do wonders at getting and keeping your attention.

Cynthia turned out to be a real person, that was nice; Sharon was real, too, but only after that first mutual success. ---- Oh, that darn Bill, how come he was able to look so good?

Comment by Judy on 07/20/04
Good job!  I always look forward to reading your stories.  I guess they could have told him that he could wear a suit on Monday and when he said okay, they could inform him that they meant a skirt suit!  



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