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Hard Hal in Bermuda
by Pamela

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Comment by Silvia     (from Brazil) on 01/29/10
I'm sorry again, but this is a bad story.
I didn't like.
Silvia.

Comment by Kathy on 08/05/08
One of many great stories from you Pamela, I love Hal's forced fem stories, more please.

Comment by John on 05/23/07
I agree with Big Sissy, It was confusing at first.  I loved how Debbie has effectively taken over the marriage and has assumen the position as the dominant force.  Maybe Hal wouldn't have been so contrary to his being used as Debbie was going to if Debbie would have used her hair brush on his bottom.

Comment by brooke on 09/22/05
Just one word .... MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

Comment by big sissy husband on 09/14/05
I absolutely loved the ending and want to know more. It was confusing having the same apparent characters as the other Hal story due to the ending in that story. More please!



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