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Hard Hal's Heaven and Hell
by Pamela

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Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 01/28/10
I'm sorry, but this is one of the worst stories  I ever read.
Silvia.

Comment by illapa on 05/31/06
very good and very interesting end.

Comment by Beardy on 05/26/06
Not exactly a fun time had by all,
but at least they had a happy enough ending.

Comment by sissycamila on 05/26/06
Nice story with a few surprising twists. In the beginning I thought Debbie and Lila had it all planned out to get together and leave Hal done and ready with Brock. I didnīt think it would end as you have let it.



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