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The Harpist
by Alyssa Davis

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Comment by Silvia. on 06/01/10
Why Terry didn't do SRS, if she feels like a woman?
I didn't understand this!
Silvia.

Comment by Christy Ann W on 05/22/10
Another very lovely story from you...just beautiful! Christy

Comment by ashley on 04/27/10
Great story and being a musician , wow , what a way to become a professional artist.

Comment by Lisa Meaghan on 11/29/05
You are very articulate and you do very well with describing what the "homme en femme" is feeling and going through.

Comment by julie j on 02/25/05
a very good storyline &a lot of help from his mother not suprised that he was accepted by his father  intresting conception glad he was honest with his friend /husband well written i agree the sex could have been left out it spoilt the mood

Comment by Rone on 01/06/05
Verrry well done ... the sex at the end could have been left out...
good story line and preciption ....thanks  Rone

Comment by Broni on 11/01/02
Alyssa,

This story is well plotted and well written. Your descriptive powers are fabulous. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

Broni

Comment by Anthony on 10/29/02
This is the best story I've ever read.

Comment by Mardee Louise Prynne on 01/09/01
This well written piece avoids cliches.  Every aspect of the transition is well done and tender.  

Comment by charlotte on 01/06/01
very well written story-enjoyed it tremendously-in the words of oliver twist 'more please'

Comment by emmie dee on 01/06/01
Emotionally effective and lovingly detailed story about teen-aged transition. I enjoyed it very much. Emmie

Comment by Paula Jutras on 01/06/01
a very sweet story. I alway love those where the person isn't a crossdresser but is talked into it and finds he likes it.

Comment by Connie Grant on 01/06/01
Very nice story, highly recommended! you are giving Janet Stickney a run for the money in producing quality stories about loving transition.  



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