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Harris School for Girls
by Rone Welles

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Comment by rone welles on 02/13/14
really nice and a good story  wish you could write more ...

Thanks  rone


Comment by Silvia. on 10/13/11
Good story.

Comment by Sally on 08/27/09
We love this story  ...  it seems short and needs to be more advertures is the future ... hope to see more..
thank you . Sally

Comment by John panty on 11/26/07
 Wow  nice  story  we need more stories that are clean and fun ..

thank you for writting


Comment by Early June on 08/03/07
This is a very cute story, and it is heartwarming too.   I like the characters and how they acted in the story.  It was fitting for their ages and in keeping with the way some young people nmay react.
So many writers seem to fall into the easy way of having todlers and teens acting and speaking alike.
This story seems too good to leave it end right here.  I hope I see more later.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
P.S If you would like, I could send you some edit suggestions. You can  contact me through my enclosed E-Mail addess.

Comment by harry on 07/15/07
thank you to every one how helped with this story i think it is one of best that i have seen in a long time

thank you
harry




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