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Haunting
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Comment by k mixon on 06/19/08
Great ghost story. That is one little girl,that I would be so ever Comment by Karen Michelle on 02/08/04 Well, how many times have I dreamed of what it's like to be a woman? And how many times have I wished I could just wake up and everything was changed, so that nobody else knew that I used to be a man, so that I could just move on with my life as a female? Plenty of times, that's how many! This was a nice story taking me where I've wanted to go so many times.... permanantly. I'm not sure I would have made the main character a lesbian, but then again, its your story and your perrogitive to do that, just as its my choice to do whatever I want with my characters when I've written some of the stories I've posted here. Comment by Paula on 02/07/04 Like it when my guess of what will happen is right. Good story and it was a nice ending. Comment by Julius on 02/07/04 Good descriptions and details, but the plot was a bit predictable. Give us a twist or something next time to surprise us. You're a good writer, I know you can do it. |
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