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Headlights Girl
by Cathy_t

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Comment by Janese on 12/13/11
That isnight's just what I've been looking for. Thanks!

Comment by Silvia. on 07/08/11
Hi Cathy.
Very good story.

Comment by vicki Stewart. on 03/08/07
hi Cathy, I really loved this story, (all 12 parts), I would give an arm and a leg to have the oppertunity to become Holly, (for ever), it wasn't OTT, it was just right and beliveable, (I wish,) Please keep up the good work, You are a very good writer, give me more,  Regards, Vicki, xx

Comment by Toni on 05/09/04
What a wonderful story, it seems so real. Too bad it isn't, I'd love to become Holly. Thank you for the very enjoyable fantasy. I prefer stories with happy endings, realistic or fantasy. Yours is one of the best. I look forward to more. Thanks again.

Comment by Broni Marsh on 03/22/04
I love this fabulous story. I just found it the other day and have read all ten episodes. I can't wait for the next one. The writing is wonderful and the character development is superb.
Thanks so much for sharing your talent.

Comment by cassndra on 01/01/04
Cathy dear,

This is such a marvelous tale I can hardly wait for the next part. Your writing is really very nice and the tale moves along swiftly. Thanks for your writing. I'll look for the next part.

Hugs and lots of love.


Comment by Julia Manchester on 01/01/04

    This little tale of yours is getting better and better.  I've been drawn into the plot and I can't seem to escape!  Keep up the great work!  

Comment by Sheryl S. on 12/03/03
What an imagination -- and even seasonal!  Very enjoyable and provocative.  Thanks for the treat!

Comment by Marshall on 12/02/03
Cathy, this story is so enjoyable.  It is one of those that is impossible but totally believable if that makes any sense.  I can not imagine your creativity if this was two days efforts.  I now expect much more and can hardly wait for more.  Do treat us soon.

Comment by Ashley on 12/02/03
WOW - Keep it up girl...  This is one that I can't wait to read the next chapter !  One book you just can't put down...

Comment by Prudence Walker on 11/27/03
Cathy, welcome back to the world of writing. thise story shows that you havent lost your touch. your mind maybe...gigglz, but not your touch. (kidding hon, about the mind) please continue this wonderful start and put your fans out of their misery of having to wait, lol. love it and you Cathy, huggles from prue

Comment by Julia Manchester on 11/26/03
This is a great start to what promises to be a very entertaining story. The style is unique, and I can't wait to read what comes next!  I've missed Cathy's stories, and it's wonderful to see her posting again.

Comment by Rich on 11/25/03
    Wow!  Cathy, I think you have a good one going here.  I really enjoyed what you have compiled so far, and I can't wait for the next part to be posted.
    I like your writing style, and the wording you have used to describe emotions.  You have set the tone quite nicely.  Although I can probably predict the ending, I think I shall enjoy the journey, none the less.  Keep up the good work.
    Sincerely:  Rich.

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