I felt the story was very compelling untill Walter was raped and forced to perform oral sex. Yes I wanted Walter to become Heather and embrace his new found feminimity but why does he have to be so violated! I just couldn't go on with the story after reading that sick part. Too bad, this story started out with so much promise.

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All of my questions settled-tahnks!

This story can only be described with SICK, SICK, SICK, SICK, AND A THOUSAND TIMES OVER SICK.  THE PART WITH RENIE WAS SO SICK THAT I SKIPPED TWO WHOLE CHAPTERS THAN DEAL WITH HER.  LINDA, PATTY, AND HER MOM & FAMILY WAS THE ONLY UPLIFTING PART IN THE STORY.  THERE WWERE TOO MANY CRIMINAL ACTS IN THIS STORY THAT WENT WITHOUT PUNISHMENT.  IT SHOWS THAT THE AUTHOR DOES NOT CARE ABOUT CONSEQUENCES OF ACTION.  CRIME AND PUNISHMENT GO HAND IN HAND.  ALSO, THE PERVERSION WAS EXCESSIVE.  SURELY, THE AUTHOR CAN WRITE A STORY THAT IS ENTERTAINING AND BE SO PERVERTED.  ON A SCALE OF 1 TO 10.... I WOULD GIVE THIS A 1 (THAT IS THE LOWEST)  I LIKE SEVERAL STORIES ON THIS SITE BUT THIS WAS A DISAPPOINTMENT.  SO MUCH SO, IT SHOULD BE REMOVED.

There is only one way to describe this story.  SICK, SICK, SICK, SICK, SICK, SICK, SICK, AND MORE SICK THOUSAND TIMES OVER.  It started off fine then the part with Renie killed the whole story.  Too unpleasant to read.  As a matter of fact I skipped two whole chapters and found when Linda came back into the picture for his rescue and protection.  Surely, the author can do better without being so perverted.

you did it again. another great story. i didnt want it to end like that. i wanted to find out what happened when she went to school and if she did have a full sex change? plus what about her boyfriend?

Renie was cruel and should of been punished like having someone special punishing her putting her through what she put the boy through i am glad Linda rescue him but what they did was unspeakable and you should of had Linda's parents understand the truth, and sue Renie for forcible rape and the uncle and his friends should of been punished at the same time Renie was. this is not what should happen there are men and boys that want to be girls and the stories can be kind there are some written by a person on this site that are kind but at least heather now has  a home lucky this is only fiction.

I find this story a typical example of a sick dream.
The scenario is to build an impossible situation for your character/hero(ine).
With the impossible situation created you can treat her/him like shit knowing that there is no way out.

Then if the author is 'morally inclined' (s)he can 'rescue' him/her into a situation that the character, as compared to before, will seem as his/her 'salvation'.
Kind of like out of the flames into the fire if you see my drift here.

To me it sucks bigtime, it's sick manipulations from the start to the finish.
It just makes me tired.

And you know what :)
It's not even good penmanship.

Cheers
Yoron.

i have just reread this story its brilliant well written what more can i say you have a brilliant way of writing and the story was a complete picture of the good &the bad how walter sorted it out &dealt with it more stories like thiswould be great well done brilliant writing

i love this story. its my favorite. can you tell me where others are that you wrote. this story is awesome

I have final finished reading this story it was brilliant and very enjoyable walter had a hard life but at least he would be better cared for&looked after with lindas parents &back to school with the girls fantastic plot and really well worth the read no part was boring it was great all the way through more please

a brilliant continuation of this story it is really well written &described look forewards to reading part four shortly great imagination & a brilliant story so far

a great start to what is turning into a wondeful, i think that what rennie is planning is very wicked also, the gardian of walter his uncle is a very sick man along with his freinds what a thing to do to a seventeen year old at least it seemsthat lynda is being carefull& more help to the boy i look foreward to reading the next part soon well done great story so far

Jackie, I was pulled to your story by a chain of events. Another author praising your work and suggesting a read of one of your stories before that one.  I am an olde Kansas lady that has years of law enforcement background.  I didn't read that story, however, and was drawn to your story of "Heather" since that is my chosen name.  I was enthralled with the whole story.  I felt deep emotions for Heather and her consequences and circumstances. Cheering for her, crying for her, laughing with her when she did a little and feeling relieved at the end and full of joy for her then.  I felt compassion for Linda and Pattie most of the time. But also felt that their hand(s) had a lot to do with the extreme changing of Heather's life and the unfortunate turn of events that threw her into Renie's clutches. I too, like one reader, couldn't understand why Pattie would jeporidize her medical future in the way she did (but then this was a story that had it's twists to work through).  Carol was a mixed bag and I sort of liked her from the middle of it.  Renie was a she-devil and need far worst to happen to her than did. She was instrumental of course in the changing and growth of Heather, but the abuses were more than I wanted for her. Thank God for friends like Tina, Gina, Chrsitine and Peter (especially Peter) for saving her from Renie in the end. I wondered how you would ever get Heather away from and back to Linda (it was obivious that Heather would end up in Linda's arms and Connie's home from the start to me). You did an excellent creative work of art in getting there with marvelous twists and turns along the way. This is my first read of your stories but not my last. Thank you for sharing.

Only recently did I discover the "Posted This Date" bar at the bottom of the Whats New Page. Until now I hve always enjoyed rereading "Executive Assistant" but now my reread list has expanded to include "Heather". This is a great story done by an effective writer. To perform at this high level for a novel of this length is no mean feat.Thanks to Jacki for this gem and thanks to Crystal's format for helping me unearth this gem.
Another Brian

finally finally you bring a story to its full fruition and ending without teasing us and telling us you are going to write a sequel and never do.  You are a great writer Jackie.  You really get the reader involved in your characters and you know how to leave a reader wanting more.  Your stories when you leave them unfinished as you have with several of your previous stories leave your readers very very frustrated.  Thank you for finally finishing one.  <<Sigh!!!>> what a relief, Now please finish the others, or I will...
Sincerely Markusv

An excellent and well written story. The Renie character was extremely well developed. She had beauty, good friends and was clever.  But because of inherit cruelty (and finally evilness) she loses everything - she had to. I am mystified by the Patty character. She is perceptive and intelligent - yet she jeopardizes her medical career in stealing and injecting a hormone into an unconscious minor. Why?

  Jacki writes a story that is definitely worth a reread.  Not only is "Heather" (the story not the character)a great show of love between family and friends (by the end)it also shows the depths of depravity that the animal that calls itself human can sink to.  Renie has to be the most vile character I have seen in printed word ever!  Which begs for an Epilog to be added after the wonderful ending Part 4 gave us, if and only if a suitable punishment can be devised to give justice to Heather (the character not the story) for the torment and torture she was put through.  But still a wonderful story as is.

I liked the story{especially the ending}very much!Renee was such a sick,perverted bit** !!!! I'm VERY glad she got what happened to her,but I think she deserved a taste of her own medicine though!!
I am glad of the ending though...if you hadn't freed Heather I would have sooo ticked off!! lol :).You are very good,please do more!
:) Aine :)

Geezze, oh wow, this is one of the best yet. I haven't finished with the story as it is quite long. Still, I can't help but say this is a great story, one for the history books. I love the writings of this author. If anyone wants to read a truely lovely story and see how a story should be told this is the place. Jacki, you're one of a kind, seriously your now my favorite author. No one is close. The story of Walter, now turning into Heather is astounding, marvelous, well done and any surpurlative I can or can't think of. I only wish I could do what you have been able to do. I hope that the length of your story does not stop someone from reading it. The time it takes to read this story will not be wasted. To read a shorter story and pass this one up would be a crime. Excepting for a few mispelled words which I'm sure you just missed, this is your best that I have read to date. I'm not finished with it as of yet, however I just had to write to tell all those who read the reader comments that this is the one if you only have the chance to read only one story. Please take the time to read it, I'm here to tell you it's on the top of my list of extremely talented authors who have posted on this site.

I am sad to say that I have come to the last of your stories available at this site.Perhaps this was your best work yet. I am always reluctant to stop reading, certainly until I have completed one of the parts.You are one of the best and more talented authors on this site. Your expertise and knowledge of the subject are evident. Please try not to keep us waiting too long for your next gripping adventure into the world of transgenderism.