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Heaven and Hell III: Angelique: A Hell Maid's Work is Never Done
by Maggie Finson

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Comment by Dave Ingram on 07/14/02
Maggie

Just read Heaven & Hell 3

Very good plot line, love the link with Norse mythology.

Fight scenes........

I am/was a fencer, and a member of the Arms & Armour society.
Don't want to criticise what is a very good story but I
think the fight scenes could be upgraded a bit, without
destroying the flow of the story.

Your narrative flow and pace is very good, reminiscent of GR
Dickinson, Drake, et al.

Keep going,there is definitley a marketable full length novel in there

Cheers




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