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Heaven and Hell: Lillith's Ransom
by Maggie Finson

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Comment by Steve on 11/26/10
I must say that I've truly enjoyed all of the story. I've read all the sections pretty much back to back. This is a real hit in my humble opinion. One "Hell" of a tale that is also "Heavenly" in the overall structure and very concise and coherent from start to finish. I've been studying all religion since 1981 and can say from one who knows we are a part of creation with a creator that there is nothing in here that should offend anyone unless they miss the prime dictate to us all as part of creation and that is to love each other as we love ourselves. It was a truly delightful story and will have to reread a little later on as I have to good of a memory sometimes. Thank you so much for sharing what to me is true art from you and you have the ability to rival all mortal writers I've read and I'm far from illiterate and quite eclectic in my reading as well as other tastes. I wish you well on all other works you place your hand to. I can only imagine the conversation if we were to ever meet and doubt it would ever be boring or fizzle out. Take care.













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