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Heaven and Hell: Lucifer's Daughter
by Dr. Bender

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Comment by Steve on 10/15/10
I want to thank you for posting this very nice story on the net. I thoroughly enjoyed every bit of it. It has quite a range of input from various genre's that went together seamlessly. Bravo!!!!!!!!!!
Comment by Yoron on 05/31/08
Dr Bender.
Following your advice I've had a long and enlightening Conversation with my aunt.

There is only one problem, I seem to have got stuck here.
Not that I'm complaining though, furthest from my mind.
I saw what happened to the last one complaining.

But still, Dr Bender.
Is there any chance in hell for me to be able to get out of here?

Thankful in advance for any advice
And best regards
Yoron.

Comment by Yoron on 05/31/08
Dr Bender reading you I've gotten this feeling that you're more than normally acquainted to those beings that traverse our living space.

Would it be possible for me to ask your indulgence in contacting a favorite aunt of mine?

She used to go by the name of Genghis Kahn but that was after she took up cross dressing.
Otherwise if I remember right her name was honoriette L'amour.
I've often wondered why she took up plundering and pillaging instead of stitchery.

Using your eminent connections perhaps you could find it in you to lay  my anxiety to rest and so end this inquisitiveness of mine?

Anyway, thanks for your biography.
It was and still is very good.
It was a good day in hell :)

Cheers
Yoron.

Comment by Malcontent on 12/09/07
One of the most intelligent pieces of writing I have come across on the TG circuit. Witty, pacy, compelling and hugely inventive.
Comment by Sue on 11/26/07
Are you from Germany? I guess so because of the word "ende". I'm from Germany too and I have to say you did an amazing job here. Good story. I'm looking forward to your next one.
Comment by Susan Barker on 11/20/07
A Good Story, I enjoyed it.

Alison

Comment by Patricia on 11/16/07
AMAZING!

Wonderful story, such that I could not stop, and I've missed a meeting.   Oh well, I didn't want to go to that meeting anyway.

Seriously, one of the best stories I've read in a long time.  Intelligent, funny, well paced, and sexy enough to keep me hoping for a bit more.



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