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Heavy Smoke
by Andrew J

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Comment by Ron on 01/26/10
Absolutely brilliant. Thank you.

Comment by Bev on 10/17/09
Faaan-tastic!
Do write more.

Comment by missy on 03/15/08
the best!!!   loved it hurry up with the next chapter

Comment by toni on 03/11/08
Love the story so far, its well paced, and well written. please carry this on as its to good not to finish.

Comment by M on 01/06/08
I can't wait for the next part to see where it goes.

Keep at it , this has many possibilities

M


Comment by juliej on 12/06/07
intresting start but a fantasy it would be better if it was not in his mind but this actually happened look foreward to the next part



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