great story nexxt part please

what a set up brilliant story more please

this is a great begining to what looks like to be a great story well set up &well written I could imagine how he felt what a way to go

intresting story I feelall of this must have been planned before this is just to much to imagine it has not been planned i feel it needs a bit of protest and enforcement if it happend to me i would be furious

Sorry really what mother would want her daughter to be a whore? I just cant see that happening sissy maid maybe like the father but a whore?

The object of the story is to titillate, not have a believable plot line.  This is one hot story!

If the father and son did not want to be feminized, they would have rebelled.  They both like to wear women's clothes; even sissy ones at that.

sissy jeannie

After reading the other comments, I have to agree with Jezzi and Dayna. There is nothing given in the story as a reason to treat him so. Brow beaten and misused in real life would probably lead to suicide.

While the writing and grammar were good to very good, the plot line and build up were not bordering on terrible.

If Mom was going to feminize him because she thought he'd turn out like his dad, why as a whore?  I would think she'd want to turn him into a proper young lady. It's also beyond the suspension of disbelief that this boy offered no resistance whatsoever to what was being done to him.  

interesting surprise with the mom at the end

pretty thin premise for a feminisation story.

while I'm sure the surprise ending was supposed to be a surprise I can hardly see how anyone would be surprised by it?  I mean what kid would believe that their mother wouldn't rescue them from whatever it was that they got into?

I dunno maybe I'm just not seeing something erotic in the fetish of the story, but I'm lost for understanding the motivation for punishing the son for the sins of the father.  I think the story of the father would be much better.

It could start with her finding the secretary and the husband together and procede from there.  Then at least we understand the anger... and we'd (well not me but others) be able to revel in the humiliation and fetish heaped upon this undeserving bastard.

You put a lot of effort into this story and for that I appologise for my harsh words.   I'm sorry but I think the story needs more.

Dayna.

WHY?????

Christopher is clearly in for an exciting, if unsettling, time. My
only problem is that the mother's motivation is not clear.  But
perhaps in later installments it will be.

Pervy

read the story and would love to find out what happens during the shopping trip.  Also love the outfits the characters wear.

I really enjoyed the story and hope to hear alot more from Heidi.  Please continue.  It is a really good story.