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Her Daughters
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Aleesha on 10/10/10
I always enjoy your stories and this was not an exception. However even knowing that men can be right bastards Joanne took her hatred further.

Comment by Chelsea on 02/08/08
Wow, I really liked this story, Chris was allowed to find her true self, and realized who she really was. She's lucky though, most kids that had this happen to them, weren't so lucky. I really liked how her mother said she can be whatever she wants to be. A girl is not confined to just art and pretty clothes, she can be a scientist, mathematician, or even a geneticist like this one girl I met((she was sooooooo smart!)) girls can be anything they want to be, and so can boys.

Comment by rone on 07/31/06
Good story  well written  the way it should be at the end

being raised as a girl he never had to learn what it took ot be one and always will be happy .....the dad is a jerk from day one..

thank you for sharing we us  ...Rone


Comment by julie j on 12/31/04
a great story heavy to read butr explained well its a shame that it was hard for chris but at least he got his chance at the end  well written

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/18/04
This seemed incomplete.  I expected it to continue with conflict provided by the dad.

Comment by Billie on 10/15/03
You had me wondering if "she" was going to mess up and people find out she was not a female bodily.  You handled the situtation very well and provided a happy ending without embarassing anyone in the story.  A very good job.



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