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Her Maid for the Weekend
by Pen2

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Comment by Emmy on 12/27/19
I don't know if you are still writing but I will add my wish that there were more to this story. If you are still writing have you tried Fictionmania?

Comment by jjconn on 06/27/17
if a manager would have seen her embarass & humilate nick like that she could've been fired!! he should have walked out the door - no sale - she would have to restock the items & as far as she knew he could have been buying rags to wipe greasy hands on!!!

Comment by Silvia on 04/06/10
Oh! My GOD!
What a bad, bad, bad, bad, bad story you wrote.
I'm very sorry for you, really!
Silvia.

Comment by Stefanie on 10/15/09
Thank heaven for naughty little girls. This is what dreams are made of.

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 03/27/08
As before, more please. This is a delightful beginning. But, what is in store for Yvette now that she has become the "dainty" maid? I know it would be simply delicious; so -- MORE PLEASE!

Comment by juliej on 03/10/08
more please  needs to be continued

Comment by juliej on 01/13/08
good story more please

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 11/02/07
Lovely, but please . . . more

Comment by Lily on 06/19/06
Very nice! More please.

Comment by cdmike on 06/17/06
wow some guys have all the luck.wish i could be so lucky

Comment by Beardy on 05/31/06
Getting there...
I'm not sure where, but then the journey is often more interesting than the destination.

Comment by kait on 05/23/06
yay! write more! write more!

Comment by B on 12/25/05
Yeah seriously, give us more story.  Give the people what they want!

Comment by Sam (MB) K on 12/01/05
I don't get whether this character was really buying panties.. or whether she made him buy panties.

--Sam

Comment by maurice on 11/26/05
nice story - well told and the characters are good. please carry on as i would love to read more.
 thanks,
maurice

Comment by Amy Anne on 11/26/05
More please.  Love the start

Amy

Comment by SassySue on 11/20/05
Nice start.  Can't wait to see what happens after Nick puts on Samantha's panties.  Please post larger parts next time.

Thanks,
SS



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