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He Should Have Played Ball
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Comment by wendy k hill on 09/13/23
Chapter 4 Just totally adorable with the wonderful dresses and his girlish feelings about them JUST WONDERFUL !!! Keep safe keep smiling Love Wendy xxx Comment by Sissy29000 on 01/01/18 Thank you for this story, one of the most moving and psychologically strong among all the sissy stories of the internet. Comment by julih on 02/11/13 great story next part please Comment by julih on 02/07/13 its a brilliant story lets hope the next part is just as good it would be intresting if his sister caught him and he then had to wear them Comment by Jamie on 01/11/12 Such a moving story. I do hope Chris gets to be a bridesmaid. Despite all the difficulties he has a lovely, understanding mummy, as well as a pretty older sister who is on his side. Please let him know the joy of wearing gorgeous dresses and having lovely hair and make up. He'll be sohappy inside. Comment by Clarissa on 01/22/10 I love it! Please I do hope you will continue! Comment by ALISON MARY on 08/20/09 Come on,Erica,don't leave us in suspense !!I loved your story--- Comment by Philipa on 05/25/09 Erica, thankyou for a fantastic story. I loved all parts of it. I hope you someday find time to do a part 6 because this story has plenty of fans. Thanks, Philipa xxx. Comment by Delicate Moth on 04/09/08 A well-paced and measured story. I hope you will come back to it. It is exciting and the sweet, light tone is refreshing. Comment by Sephrena Miller on 08/29/06 This is actually a great story Erica. Well thought out and well executed. You made the dispicable Molly very easy to hate, and Chris so vulnerbale. It fits well. However I did notice a conceptual story flaw, its minor though. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 08/20/06 After Part 5: Comment by juliej on 01/20/06 a very good story it seems to me that this is smoe kind of set up will comment further after the next parts Comment by Darlene T. on 01/20/06 Loved it. All of it. Please keep writing. You are such a talent. And by all means don't forget the R-rated part. Comment by Sissy Baby Paula on 01/10/06 Nice, warm and sweet story! I particularly liked Chris's uncertainty and thoughts about him/herself as I am sure most of us has been at times unsure of our gender identities. The contrast with a twin girl who really is a boy is also a good touch. I just hope they will get along in reversed roles WHEN you continue the story! Comment by Andrea Foster on 01/10/06 Very nicely done so far, with lots of intriguing development to come. Looks like Chris and Molly are on the same path, in different directions. Comment by CC on 01/07/06 I concur with Stephanie. You might want to have Chris begin going to school as Molly, and Molly as Chris, with everybody commenting on the newly masculine Chris, and the newly feminine Molly. Of course, Johnny will have to be "Molly's" boyfriend. Comment by Pauline on 01/04/06 Oh, Erica, darling...such a beautiful atory of awakening sexuality and so well written. The promise of Sean raising Chris to the beginning of immense pleasure, brought down by his mother's entrance and raised to a peak as he finally saw himself as he truly was meant to be. Comment by Carolyn Renee on 01/04/06 Lovely, lovely story! I am so jealous of Chris. Please continue the story. Love & Kisses Carolyn Renee Comment by stephanie on 01/03/06 I LOVE IT!!!!! It is so sweet and sentimental. Chris' mom is sooooo good in having her son make the transition so subtle and so undidected by Chris. I do hope you continue this story, with Chris taking Molly's place in the wedding party. Maybe you can have Molly take Chris' place, so this way no one will know about the switch. Maybe molly can become the son their father always wanted and Chris can be the second pretty daughter of the family. Hope to read the next few installments very soon. Comment by jane t on 01/03/06 his mother is very skillful at pantying this boy and handling his gushing into his panties Comment by Ramona on 01/01/06 What a nice story But it would be a shame not to go on with it. You have done a nice job with it so Please add more. Comment by Jill Hayes on 11/08/05 I love this story. It is my upbringing with the pain and joy of being a feminine boy. Please write more. I look forward to reading further into this wonderful tale of boyhood feminine budding. Comment by Beberose on 03/15/05 Thanks for this story-But very frightened on what will arrive next- Highly the continuation Comment by Berta on 03/05/05 Very nice story, so far, but what a place to leave a reader hanging!! Where is or when is part 2? One can assume what's about to happen but it needs to be read!!! |
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