just had wonderful time reading your simulating story.  my little sissy nipple really wet my pretty pink panties. when i read your stories i want to spray my sissy cream straight into my mouth. hay maybe you could make a story about that .   thanks sissy donna

good story tables turned in one heck of away donna learnt the hard way and with a freind it was interesting how it worked out talk about women being the bosses way to go

Darlene my darling another great story .I simply love the cock sucking . All pretty fem men must suck cock .and swallow cum.

Jezzi Belle did have good points as I wondering why the character was so submissive off the bat and why the ending just seemed to be a cliffhanger. I enjoyed very much though it left a lot to be desired.

After reading this delightful story I know I'm a little girl sissy fairy who would love to give another sissy a nice pansy blowjob. You're story makes me feel so ultra femmy especially the part of the pink curlers and pink frosted lipstick. Ummmmmm Yes I love being a cocksucking little pansy whore. Luv Pansy
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Lotsa fun fetish fantasy.  Thank you for your work sweetheart.  I appreciated your effort.
EnjoyLife!

While I agreed with Jezzi Belle's criticism, I also agreed with Gail and SissyBilli.  

I think Darlene wrote an enjoyable, hot fantasy and look forward to reading more.

SS

So she turned a guy who made $300,000 a year into a streetwalking slut. One question: What corner is "he" working?

Darlene,

Despite the criticisms of the earlier posters I think this is a very nice story.  I agree that more of a motive needs to be there, but this is a great fantasy, and I think suspending disbelief isn't an issue.  I especially liked the pink lipsitck on her cock, I may have to try that!

Keep up the good work,
Kisses
Gail

I usually enjoy Ms. LaQueene's stories even though I know they are going to follow a pattern and utilize certain elements.
Still, this tale just didn't work for me. As a previous reviewer said it appeared rushed at the end.

Also, the logic behind doing it just escapes me. If he had been unfaithful or something. But he's making great money.
I echo the previous reviewers question asking: Will this affect his writing?  

Pretty hot, but then rushed to ward the end.

I felt this stolry was incomplete.  
1)  The big WHY?  Boredom does not seem a sufficient motivation for what carla did to Dan.  There was nothing to indicate that he deserved in any way what was done to him; this made carla a completely unsympathetic character, just a total bitch, and there was no set up to indicate why she would be that way.  There was nothing to indicate they didn't love each other, yet no one who loved a person at all would do what carla did.
2)  Dan was making $300,000. as a writer.  How did what was happening affect his writing?  My guess is she would have to keep him constantly on the potion, otherwise he would have left her after the first session wore off.  There is no set up for him being naturally submissive, in fact just the opposite as he resisted her non-potion attempts to sway him.  There is no indication that he in any way secretly liked being humiliated.  Given this and the extreme forced humiliation, I can't see any blackmail, etc. that would keep him from leaving her once the potion wore off.  She could order him to write, but writing under command might not be the kind of writing that made $300,000.  Same if she ordered him to forget what happened during the sessions, and let him return to normal to write; his subconscious, where a lot of good writing comes from, would remember.  Was she killing the goose that laid the golden egg to satisfy her warped desires?  There is no indication that she even considered that, and there is no indication she had income of her own.  I suppose, since the author has made her a total and complete bitch, she could have him make $$$ as a whore or porno star or something, but we are not told.
3)  There is no indication of what happens.  Is Carla successful in keeping Dan that way?  I hope not.  I hope Dan finds a way to turn the tables on her, the betraying bitch.

Needed proof read badly
Otherwise not a bad story