What a fun story!  Thanks Laurie!

I for one did not see it comming and loved the ending...thanks

What can one say? It was a wonderful fun story.

This is BEST TG story that turns out XXX to XX a TG Story. Please KEEP up the good work!

Just enough misdirection to keep us off-balance.  I'm such a fool for happy endings that all is forgiven!  

Extremely funny it was!   I sort of guessed about half way through what was going to happen, but nevetheless it was amusing to follow through and see if it did.

Thanks, it was entertaining and well written.

Fun story, effectively paced and plotted. Although I found the gimmick a bit transparent, the story still left me eager to find out how things would shake down.  Laurie does her usual fine job working through teenaged narrators, and takes clever advantage of the TG plot convention that has us suspend our disbelief over a high school kid who can be a dead ringer for a supermodel.

Still, I'm a little unsure about the ethics of letting a first-person narrator actively mislead the reader, as Jeff certainly seems to do in describing his thoughts and reactions on Prom Night.  Furthermore, once we try to sort out What Did Jeff Know And When Did He Know It, the suspicion develops that he's still not telling the whole truth in the hotel room that night.  Did our hero nobly turn down the prom date with the cheerleader because of loyalty to Jamie, or had he already made the key inference after Jamie's phone call and realized that he'd hit the jackpot?

Eric