I loved this story. Made me cry especially the last third part. I love mushy romantic stories that make me cry! I love your work,VMS!

Lovely story, Valentina.  This one ranks with professional writers. Thanks for such a feel-good romance!

Such a lovely story.

Very good story.
Hugs.
Silvia.

Tina, wonderful story of loves that withstood hardships beyond endurance. I have seen too many couples destroyed.  Too see these couples love makes my heart sing. If Erin ever has a special contest for Valentine's Day, I think you should post this story.

What a beautiful story !

Thank you for a really great read.  Enjoyed it to death!

For once, a T* ghost story in which the ghost is not malignant! This would be a memorable story for that alone.  As it is, it's a real gem. What a pity one doesn't find ghosts like Jennifer in real life.


--Pervy

Thank you for a wonderful story.
I'm 59 years old and it had tears running down my cheeks.  I would enjoy reading more stories in this vein.

What a delicious story!

The long, involved conversations are exceptionally well crafted.  They reveal character development and move the plot along.  You deserve extra kudos for the way you make the three-way conversations seamless.

It is a lovely story with several wonderful messages.  I especially enjoyed the way you advocated a method of controling their arguments . . . without becoming didactic.

Please email me. Let me know where your other stories are posted.

Jill M I

Very good story.
I'm a bit of a history buff, so I noticed a few errors.
(1) John Sedgwick *wasn't* a Colonel; he was a Major General at the time of his death--although that could be explained away by stating that the picture or portrait was made earlier in his career;
(2) He *also* wasn't killed by a "stray bullet"--a Confederate sniper shot him;
(3) And lastly, the "mission crush" often seen on bomber pilots' headgear *wasn't* caused by repeated use of radio earphones--it was caused by the tradition of *STOMPING THEM UNDERFOOT*, both to bring luck and to signify that another mission was completed (during World War II, bomber crews were sent home after the completion of 25 consecutive missions--the first crew to accomplish this milestone was the crew of the B-17 "Memphis Belle", in 1943).
Like I said, though--this *IN NO WAY* detracts from the enjoyability of the story. I was just offering a little help, in the event that Ms. (?) Smith decides to update the story in the future.

Lovely story. The discriptions of the mansion were great. I could see every small detail as you discribed it. I also loved the fact that you had a small twist at the end of the story that I was not expecting. This is the first of your stories I have read and I think I am hooked. The only negative thing I can say is not really all that bad. I only noticed one typo. Keep up the good work.