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H is for Helen - A Very Different Sort of Student
by Bethany Jacques

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Comment by Silvia. on 01/03/11
I loved.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Jo on 01/04/05
Thanks
We need a chapter more, at least. One storyline could be that Helens MPMs will decrease to Cs, and that she realises that she will have to tell her parents that she will keep her mammaries like that and that she will like to live out her tranny part. Maybe back to school as Helen, and dating David for a while before she goes on on her own...

Comment by juliej on 12/17/04
its a good story but the issues must not get confused it wasa a good twist at the end with marion turning up early i must say i have enjoyed this story it was well written & explained

Comment by wanda on 12/08/04
You should add a 2nd chapter where he starts taking his meds so he will keep his chest and lives with his teacher full time the next year

Comment by SassySue on 12/04/04
Nice, well written story.  I wish I had Helen's problem, but not necessarily DD's.  That seems a little extreme.  I always thought C's were just right on a normal sized girl.  And to have my own would be devine.

Keep up the good work.

SS



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