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Hall of Mystic Mirrors: Veiled Truths
by Maggie Finson

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Comment by Khadija Boucher on 11/22/06
Salaam Alaykum Maggie:
I see you know of Muslims. I happen to be one and found your story charming. It is too bad that this writing is not more main stream.

Many Blessings to you.

Khadija


Comment by Coyote M Bishop on 01/07/01
   Discrimination is the seed begotten from feelings of inferiority.  Brave Roxanna showed not the fear of being a lowly women but the valor of a loved one.  I enjoyed your story very much.

Comment by Maggie Finson on 12/14/00
As Nellie has pointed out, the fact that Ellie Dauber came up with this idea for a Halloween series of stories, then opened it to wother writers seems tohave been left out of the text.  I apologize to Ellie for that, and thank Nellie for pointing the fact out to me.

You can find the original story by Ellie Dauber at TG_Fiction@egroups. I highly recommend it to any interested parties.

Comment by Nellie D on 12/14/00
The story has twists and turns that keep the reader interested until the last word. Good plot and story line. It is based on a universe started by Ellie Dauber and her original appeared in TG_Fiction at eGroups about Halloween time



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