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The Holiday
by Zoez

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Comment by PJ on 05/06/16
I Loved this Story, It's about Feminizing a man to become a Woman and not about Feminizing a Man in order to get rid of him or accepting an open marriage.  Like so many stories are about.  So that the wife could keep having her affairs and the Husband or boyfriend wouldn't mind. this Story is Excellent.

Comment by Silvia. on 05/19/13
Very bad story!!!!
When Chris discover he was tricked by Zoe, I think he will beat her until she die.
Zoe doesn't like Chris, she doesn't deserve his love!

Comment by juliej on 06/14/08
great story so sweet and he did not relaise the change what a way to go, more please

Comment by lee lee on 01/04/08
A gentle and lovely story   I like the idea of sneaking in hormones ono a guy and having him slowly accept his feminine side. It is a fantasy of mine that will never come true,   But thanks for the trip

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 04/21/07
A very romantic story with a seemingly happy ending, BUT ...

What will happen when Julie finds that Zoe tricked Chris with the hormones - and the liklyhood is that at some point she will?  She may have been keeping Chris suppressed, but that could bring him back with a vengence.  If Julie had already had SRS by that time, he would be a man who had been in the right body and now was not.  I don't know if FtoM SRS is reversable or not, but if not, it could drive him to violence either against himself or Zoe or both.  

Even if he decided to accept being Julie, knowing that Zoe, the woman he had thought loved him, was really so selfish as to have had no qualms about changing him so profoundly without his knowledge or consent to achieve what she wanted might cause him to just leave her.




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