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The Holiday of a Lifetime
by Susan Kershaw

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Comment by washington dc on 06/30/21
ofego6 I truly appreciate this article post.Really looking forward to read more. Really Cool.

Comment by jeremy abrams on 05/15/17
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Comment by diane on 08/14/14
This was the best story I have ever read and I have read 1000's. It was written with such class. You could just feel the emotion of the characters-truly well done Ms. Kershaw!!!

Comment by crorkz matz on 08/04/14
7aGLTU Thanks for sharing, this is a fantastic article.Really looking forward to read more. Fantastic.

Comment by pixie on 07/17/12
   This is a lovely erotic story, it's the first time I've read it all the way through,
but what will happen when Susan's / Tony's mother and her new husband return? Please write more, at least another couple of chapters.
 kind regards, Pixie.  xxxx

Comment by Christy W. on 07/06/08
Dear Susan...I've read your story twice now on different days. Loved it both times and will probably read it again another day. You've created such a lovely couple and your sex between them is fantastic! I enjoy stories of sweet "aunts" and their "nieces" and you've given me some nice ideas for a story of my own. I look forward to more from you. Keep up the good work!

Comment by Kriss on 02/23/06
Is it true this is the end for our hero and his wonderful,fantastic and understanding Auntie.
Well done (and if it is true) on a great 3 part story if only we could meet an understanding lady like this the world would be a far far better place.
Again well done XXXXXX

Comment by Kriss on 09/08/05
My don't we all wish we had a nice auntie like Tony.
A story told with true feeling thats holds you until the very last word.  Wonderful!!!!

Comment by Karen on 09/08/05
Wonderful story! I like how you describe every article of clothing and the time you take in having Aunt Sybil in dressing Suzie (Tony).I loved the photo shoots and the clothing that was worn. I am a bit sad that you didn't find time to have Suzie dress in several cheerleader uniforms or as a Barbie doll.Perhaps in some future chapters, Suzie will attend an all girls school, complete with school uniform. Then maybe she can become a cheerleader for an all boys school. The involvement of sex is done very well, but perhaps a boy her own age will become involved and she will then become the girl, she so seems to want to be. Maybe Penny and Suzie will double date and all. Hope the story continues soon.

Comment by juliej on 08/29/05
tyhe story weas intersting &well written

Comment by Matthew on 08/15/05
Enjoyed The Story ... When Will The Rest of The Story be continued?

Comment by Diane on 04/17/05

This is a lovely story. For me, the sex portion was all right

Comment by Jane Hudson on 04/04/05
Nice gentle story loved it

Comment by Donna Dee on 04/02/05
 This is indeed a pleasant, easy to read story.  However, with regard to Angel's comments, (further down) it is a slightly modified version of Dee Dee Pauca's story, "The making of Dee Dee" - which can be found on this site under her name.   I venture to suggest that the original is best, but then, the originals of movies that are re-made are usually better than the copies - dont you agree?

Comment by Stephanie on 04/01/05
A wonderful story! Unfortunately I have to agree with Jezzi Stewart, I feel the introduction of sex on her part was un-necessary! I think it would have been better if Aunt Sybil would have just continue taking Suzie down the road to girlhood. Teaching her about the wonderful world of ultra-femininty would have been great. Maybe the sex can be re-introduced a little later, this time with a boy who is Suzie's age! Of course, school wouldn't be to far off in the story ( a girls school,maybe?). Please continue the story, I'll be looking forward to reading the next installment!

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 03/30/05
I would have liked the story if you had left out the sex.  It would have been a sweet story of a loving aunt gently leading a young man into the wonderful joys of femininity.  But as soon as the sex stuff appeared Auntie changed for me from a loving aunt to a pedophile.

Comment by Angel on 03/29/05
I have read this before. Is this a rewrite, or is it a repost?

Huggles
Angel

PS I read the first few paragraphs and knew I had read this one before. If you have changed it or added to it, I will gladly read it again.

Comment by Carolyn Renee on 03/29/05
Lovely start to a beautiful story line my dear. Please continue with Susie's adventures! Love & Kisses  Carolyn Renee



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