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Holly Potter And The Army Of Darkness
by Kim West

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Comment by Eric J. Templin on 02/04/09
To:Crystal's Story Site(Holly Potter & The Army Of Darkness), I think you have a winner here I really do. As I am a FAN of all the Harry Potter Series(Books & Films),I say yes to these writings & hope you will make more chapters in the coming days,months,etc.... Yours truly Eric J. Templin.

Comment by robin on 03/10/08
yes...please finish the story!! by the way, your writing sense in keeping the reader occupied (never bored) is excellent! I look forward to much more from you.

Comment by Susan Barker on 01/02/08
Oh I just love your story, It is written from the heart and I can not wait for the next part.

Susan


Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 07/31/07
YOU EVEN BROUGHT IN LORD OF THE RINGS IN THE FORM OF GOLLUM, I LOVE IT. NOW PLEASE FINISH THE STORY

Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/30/07
WOW!! You must be a DOCTOR WHO fan [ TOM BAKER} because I saw his portrayal of the TIME LORD> Thank you for bringing back an old friend, Now if you can bring in ly uhura or rand in their uniforms,,

Comment by Mike on 12/10/06
I would like to read te rest of your Potter series
I have enjoyed reading them
Plese finish the Series

Mike


Comment by Cowgirl on 07/15/06
Amazing story! Can't wait for the next installmant!!!

Comment by Mosh Pit Devil on 05/16/06
Hey, you killed me off too soon you big dummy! But I still like you anyway.

Peace and best wishes on your writing.

MPD

P.S. Death by flowers was pretty funny.

Comment by Jade on 04/15/06
Very nice but being 20 k in size right now is just to short with your talents.  Please try to lengthen them a little more I really and truly love reading these stories of yours!

Comment by Paula Jutras on 02/23/06
Holly Potter stories continue to be well done with a great knowledge of the characters and their interactions.

Comment by Rena on 02/21/06
Nice part 6 was just posted and I enjoyed it but I think it could have been longer and I was surprise with the ghost of Hufflepuff.  I know things may take awhile but can't wait for the next part to come out!

Comment by Leah on 12/23/05
GIMMIE THE REST!!!! its sooo good

Comment by Matthew on 08/11/05
OK Good Story But where is the rest of this story????? After all I would very much like to know what happens to the Charactors.

Comment by Rena on 01/22/05
Very good interesting plot with this can't wait for the next part to come.  Your a very talented author.  Please continuie writing for your fans!

Comment by Paula on 01/01/05
miss the images but always like Holly Potter tales you do and the Peter twist a good idea.

Comment by dragonqueen160 on 09/16/04
Nice story, keep up the good work.  Perhaps my only criticism is that it  seems like every guy turns into a girl.  It was alright when it was just harry, pushing it with Ron, and then downright ridiculous with everyone else.  It wasn't exactly necessary for all of them to have a sex change, was it?
Besides that, though, it enjoyed your story immensely.  Keep writing.

Comment by Rena on 09/04/04
Very good story but you still need to bring in a few more parts cause it doesn't seem like your finish with the stroy yet.  Such as Draco and the Plan to be carried out.  The Crue beinging given to the girls.Who Yukio will live with. and Vodermant in his salior Moon get up.

Comment by Paula on 07/25/04
Part 4 is great especially with Lilybee and the slumber party.

Comment by Blaze on 06/28/04
It's a great story.  Don't stop the images and don't stop the writing. :)

Comment by Improved on 05/25/04
The first this is that I wish you continued the images also.  I enjoyed this story so much that I risked sharing it with several non TG friends (who loved it too !).  One friend even now uses the book cover art picture as their background for their laptop.  Please continue the stories.  Thanks for your work.

Comment by BrianGirl on 05/25/04
I miss the images. . .

Comment by Paula on 05/24/04
well knowledge in the characters and the Potter universe itself. Darkner than the previous Holly Potter story but just as entertaining.  Look forward to future storylines of this sort when they're posted.



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