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Homecoming Princess
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Comment by me suba on 12/20/18
8RPzvZ You are my inspiration, I have few web logs and very sporadically run out from post . Comment by Silvia. on 10/21/10 Hi Arecee. Comment by An anonymous transgender on 08/02/10 I would just like to say that this story and its sequals are the happiest, most emotional, and best written stories on this site, and possibly on the whole web. I am looking forward to many more of these by Arecee. They have truly brought me happiness. Thank you Arecee. Comment by Dianna on 03/16/08 The dialog felt a bit stiff and you could use more descriptions and less speech in some areas. Comment by Melissa on 09/17/06 What an excellent story!! Your character development and detail are excellent, although somewhat clique-ish. Beyond that, you are a gifted writer and I'd love to hear more about Lynn as well as other stories you may write. Please keep up the fabulous work!! Comment by Cheryl on 07/19/06 A really good piece of writing. I'd classify this as a page turner. Love to see more and especially a happy ending. Comment by helen on 06/30/06 beautiful story - kept me engaged throughout. Lucky girl to have such an opportunity. Comment by Dillon Doe on 06/28/06 Great Story.. and very nice ending.. Comment by Trang on 06/27/06 This story is a CLASSIC. A MUST Follow-up is greatly needed. Comment by Pat on 06/26/06 Excellent story!!!!!!!! You really should do a follow up- I would love to follow this story. Very few stories make me wish to be the leading girl like this one. Kudos! Comment by Gisele on 06/26/06 Arecee what a wonderful story, This is one of the best transgendered stories I have ever read! You really should follow up with a sequel. I will certainly be looking forward to reading more of Lynn's journey to womanhood with her best friend Mindy. Maybe they can become more than just friends. Congratulations on a job well done. Comment by Davie on 06/25/06 A wonderful story and a sequel would be welcomed. Comment by Daria on 06/23/06 Great beginning! Comment by samantha on 06/23/06 very well written,hope there is a sequel to this story Comment by Jill Micayla on 06/22/06 AreCee You did well, there were a few spelling errors but they did not detract from the story. Well thought out and well put together. I hope to see a follow up with Lynn and further adventures. Very Good. Wonderful. |
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