jJ5mi4 Im thankful for the post.Much thanks again. Great.

This story is just so over the top sexually arousing!!  Your descriptions as to what our little sissy looked like after she was done changing him was priceless!

Dear Mistress Kimberly Anne Kennedy,

I liked your story. It flowed quite well. I suppose, that if you had his Wife get a Maid's Uniform for him, it would have another, over-used, story theme.

Myself, I'm a fully submissive, Housemaid/husband. My Mistress/Wife does, indeed, keep me in my Uniforms. All my pretty clothes, she has, "collecting dust." There only to taunt me and remind me, that I'm no longer a cross-dresser. She has me present myself as, "a guy in a dress," albeit a Hotel Maid's Uniform dress. I even have to wear my girl clothes and Uniform under my work uniform.

Oooops, I'm sorry, I got carried away with my chosen Life-style. It was either that or the Divorce Court.

Within your story, I could just sense the wife's fury.

"Missy," Susan

This is one Mistress after my own heart. She is smart, stern and self-confidant. And her new maid has a lot to learn -- don't they all? -- which is why punishment with implements such as the wooden spoon, paddles or riding crops are so necessary. As you can see from my maid priscilla ann's comments, I do not hestitate to punish her for the slightest disobedience, laziness or other infringemt of my rules -- I expect perfection at all times from her curtseys and her appearance to her household duties and duties as my sex toy. Well done Mistress Kimbrely, well done, indeed!

This is one Mistress after my own heart. She is smart, stern and self-confidant. And her new maid has a lot to learn -- don't they all? -- which is why punishment with implements such as the wooden spoon, paddles or riding crops are so necessary. As you can see from my maid priscilla ann's comments, I do not hestitate to punish her for the slightest disobedience, laziness or other infringemt of my rules -- I expect perfection at all times from her curtseys and her appearance to her household duties and duties as mmy sex toy. Well done Mistress Kimbrely, well done, indeed!

A very good beginning to an interesting forced feminization scenario. And the corporal punishment, followed by being made to stand in the corner for some contemplation time rings true. My Mistress Meredith has had me spend some serious corner time over the course of my service to Her, always preceded by a session with her paddle. Of course, I am usually deserving of such treatment. More please.

a great start more please asap thanks

One extreme to the other.  What did she prove here?  She didnt want to be alone and now she is out alone. *sigh*  I suppose she is independently wealthy too?  Divorce him and get it over with before the surgery or whatever else it is that kills him.  

the hard way is a lesson to be learnt very good story i would haveliked to read about how she kept himat bay ie during the night maybe another id for a future  episode well done

an interesting begining to a good story I look forward to reading more there is scope for a good deal more to this story

Kimberly Anne:

You have the beginnings of a nice story here.  Are you ever going to finish it?  

Wanting more.

This story isn't too bad if it's the first installment of a longer story but as a stand alone story it leaves a lot to be desired. It wasn't stated so the first question: is he a gambling addict? Is this just the latest in a long string of gaming sessions? Does he learn his lesson? Or what is her plan??

It seems that his transformation is for a lot longer than a day or weekend. The permanent markers won't come off for a while, almost like having a short term tattoo. I hope she does't get too nasty.

The writing is decent without major or multiple mistakes. And the plot line was developed though rather short. At points the detail and description are a little thin.

I thought the punishment wildly out of proportion to the crime.
Gambling was only his second mistake; his first was hitching up
with a woman who's clearly deranged.  Of course, it can sometimes
be hard to tell before it's too late.
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Pervy

I also thought the sharpie permanent markers was a good touch- showed some originality! I would have liked a little more description of exactly how s/he looked after the "alteration" of appearance.

Great beginning (hint hint :-) I always wondered why in most angry wife/girlfriend TG stories the woman femmed the man into a pretty woman; it didn't make sense.  I loved the use of magic markers instead of cosmetics!  Does she love him and is she trying to rehabilitate him?  I hope so.  I would love to see this expanded into a series where he slowly comes around and she manipulates him so that his goal becomes to get her to let him dress etc. like a normal woman.  For example, she makes him go grocery shopping and he thinks, "I'd rather go as a blend-in housewife than a Drew Carey Show reject." and begs.  Eventually, after adventures, "she" ends up pretty, and they end up as best girlfriends.  (I love happy endings.)

Loved your story.  He will be much healthier and better as a person to be a permanent sissy maid.  I love her cheap jewelry.  So fitting and so humiliating.