Thank you for such a sweet story. It wasn't pornographic, nobody ended up humiliated and it ended happily ever after.  Some may say it was trite and corny, what with the happy ending and all, but I'm pretty much a romantic and love happily ever afters.  

I didn't enjoy this story nearly as much as I enjoyed the author's "The Dance."  I didn't feel that the author spent as much time or paid as much attention to detail as in "The Dance."  I thought that the invitation to dinner at the AD's house was a little contrived.  I also would have enjoyed reading a little more about the meeting with the alumnus who funded their business plan because I wanted to know what they were going to sell.

However, in spite of those questions, I did enjoy the story.  I liked the fact that it was a love story.  I also liked that it was a rare story where a short guy gets a tall girl.

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How imaginitive and sweet!  I loved it so much I just read it twice. It is a truly sensitive and inuitive love story.  I do wish to learn more about this couple's lives, and about Jackie's skin care.  How about a visit from that alumnus?  I just can't wait!  

Hugs & Kisses,
Sheryl S.

That was such a sweet story! The only thing I wonder is, with all that sex they have what happens when denise gets pregnant. Perhaps that would make a good sequel...:) i say you go for it! Pretty pretty pretty pretty please?

A few places could stand to be polished a little. Dioloauge in some areas came across as stilted.

Having said that, I am Smiling as I type. If your story was aimed to put that smile there, and give me the warm feeling in my heart, then you hit the mark Dead on.

My thanks for an enjoyable read.

The Scotsman