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Hotel Room Conversations
by Rosie

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Comment by juliej on 12/31/06
its an interesting story but to short i would like to read more about what happend on the shopping trip &how the girls treated him did they humilate him and that sort of thing what happened when he got back home their is a lot more that could be done to this story well done

Comment by Sam on 06/23/06
I liked/hated this story. Ideally, the character is of an age where the character can decide what gender they want to present as. However, I completely the sexual kink theroy (that people do it purely as a sexual thing.) The story presented a character whose past and present aren't meshing very well.

I disagree with his gf. The other character is mean, and she joins in.

Not criticism, just anaylasis.



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