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Hot Kiss Red
by Sarah Acklin

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Comment by crorkz on 08/04/14

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Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/03/14

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Comment by Abby on 10/04/10

What a fantasy- very lifelike. Can sure put myself in that place!

Comment by Donald on 11/21/07

A really great story that held my interest.

Comment by tonicd on 04/29/07

Very good story. Enjoyed it very much. Was able to put myself in the sissy's shoes. Very realistic. Haunted me for days.

Comment by Annie O on 09/16/02

Having read the synopsis, I disagree with you.
Inside male lesbians is just a woman who wants another woman.

Comment by Alana1960 on 09/15/02

A Top Notch debut on Storysite.
Good plot. Well defined characters. I enjoyed this quite a bit.

Awaiting your next effort! (sorry for the late review)

alana

Comment by RJMCD on 05/12/02

------------ A good read and, just as important to me as a reader, creditable character actions and reactions. No one acts out of character or in an illogical manner, and all credit is due to the skilled author for making this so. All the necessary groundwork is concisely presented, and that allows a reader to just go with the flow and enjoy this very well crafted story. The story drew pictures in my mind – of both the people and the settings. Twists were foreshadowed.

I also enjoyed the author's style, and judgment in deciding how much detail to include in the various internal thoughts and external actions. For a first effort, it's exceptional and I'll watch for future submissions.

If you've read the categories and key words, and have gone far enough to check the reviews, keep going and read the story. You'll like it.

RJMcD

Comment by Diane on 05/10/02

Loved your intent story and hope there are more to come. I couldn't stop reading as I am a sissy cd and am going to meet with my new found friend on the 21st in Minneapolis. I hope it all goes as well as the story you have written so well. Keep up the good work, Diane

Comment by Kristen Satin on 05/02/02

Hi Sarah,

Such a wonderful story. I could not stop reading it. I do hope you continue to write for the StorySite
Huggers
Krissi

Comment by Gingerfred Man on 05/01/02

An outstanding first effort by a talented new author. The characters, especially the delicious Candi, are extraordinarily well drawn. The plot has more twists than a "Law and Order" episode. And the sex is intense. I expect many great stories from this rising tfiction star.

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