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The House of Change
by Patricia Pendragon

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Comment by Stefanie on 04/04/13
I loved this story. It was gentle and to me very rewarding. In this age where everything happens so quickly it was a relief to take ones time and enjoy change slowly. Many thanks

Comment by Silvia     (from Brazil) on 02/06/10
Well done. You wrote a good story.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by shalimar on 01/06/07
I have to admitt that I'm going to be contrary with my comment.  To me this story was "Much Adu About Nothing."  Except for one transsex change and one transex/transspecies change and a few similar changes only mentioned there was really no magic.  Phillip's training was glossed over, even though it was essential to his change.  Most of the characters were two dimetional at best, including Phillip(ia).  For example, Sylvia's interpersonal relationship to Philip was virtually non existant.  In the end nothing really happened.

Also I do object to you using the concept of Christmas that way.  Your connection to the season is an insult to a Jew, a Moslem, a Hindu, a Buddist, a Communist and others.

shalimar


Comment by Stefan on 12/01/03
A wonderful story.I really enjoyed it. Many thanks.

Comment by Rena on 11/19/03
This is a very lovely story I know it would be hard but if you be willing to let me and help me out with this I would like to continue this story.  It's up to you I hope that you will let me some day!

Comment by K. F. Phillips on 02/24/01
You are a GREAT author! If i could write half as well as you can,i would do so.  More please.

Comment by Jennifer on 01/25/01
WOW!

Breathtaking.

You are very fortunate to have such a rich, magical heritage to draw upon.

The story's pace was uneven, but to even it out, it would be a full novel!  If you are up to sequels there must be some good struggle with the forces of 'progress' to build on.

You have earned your surname well!

Comment by Dixie on 01/06/01
I liked your story very much,but I think I'd like to read about how the house itself partook in changing Phil. How about dewlving more deeply into Phil's wardrobe,perhaps making it come to life and dress him/her in what ever is proper for the time and event? Perhaps add some bondage? I loved the sceen where Phil made love with an other girl,that was a nice touch. Keep up the good work.

                           Dixie

Comment by Connie Grant on 01/06/01
I enjoyed “House Of Change” as it stands, but thought it was simply the beginning chapters of a novel – at least a much fuller story.  Certainly you have set up the universe necessary for further elaboration.  I for one would encourage you to flesh out this very promising work.

Comment by Petra Jane on 01/06/01
WOW! I have read your three stories (to date) and have certainly enjoyed them. A couple of points where perhaps not to my taste, ie: the "changes to gentilia" and the two girls making it in the Change House story but overall, EXCELLENT!

Really enjoyed reading them, more power to your pen (WP).

Comment by paul jutras on 01/06/01
have to admit it was good although unexpected. I never expected the Nympths and centurs.



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