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House Of Dolls
by Amy Sadler

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Comment by Chuck on 05/10/11
Pretty good story.  I believe you could use someone to edit and check for spelling errors but other than that, write more, please!

Comment by Silvia. on 10/26/10
Bad story.

Comment by C. Kim on 10/05/08
Great story, fun to read. Though I think it suffered a bit from too many characters that were a bit hard to keep track of.

Comment by Black-Isz on 08/17/08
Excellent! I enjoyed this story very much. Please write more stories.

Comment by Sissy Baby Paula on 04/16/08
A fitting punishment for these teenage punks. I liked the story and it is quite well written.

Hugs,
Sissy Baby Paula and Snowball (my toy puppy)

Ps. I am wearing a cloth nappy right now but hopefully won't end up as a doll...




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