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Housesitting for the Boss
by Gloria Marshall

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Comment by ladyMerkin on 11/13/16
Loved this story.
I do so wish you would add a pert two or ten.
beautiful

Comment by ashley on 07/06/14
Just had to reread this. Lovely to have a boss like Barb. Mmmmmmm

Comment by julih on 02/13/13
as per previous comments

Comment by tricky dick on 08/25/12
great story but a bit short it would be nice to have a bit nmore fem in it

Comment by Missy Susan Pauline on 12/31/10
Dear Ms. Gloria,

After a, "long day" at work today, I just had to un-wind at Storysite. My own, Mistress/Wife is in bed for the evening. All my chores are complete. I was re-calling that either two or three years ago, my Mistress/Wife and Her Girlfriend had secured me, as Their, live Christmas Tree. My my shoes and feet were tied together. Christmas light were decorated about me. Christmas oranments were attached. I hadn't seen Her that happy, since we were in Grammar School. She often uttered, "You're going to be so pretty."

Would I have liked to be, "with Her," on the sofa instead of one of Her Girlfriends? Yes, but that wasn't going to happen. I'm the, "hired help."

Hence, I keyed in, "Christmas," in the Storysite search and your story came up.

I enjoyed your story. You wrote it very well. You, "back-grounded," when you needed to do so. Your descriptions were very nice.

You see, I'm the Housemaid/husband. I'm also the only wage-earner. My Mistress is MY life. I do hope you'll write more.

Sisterly yours,

"Missy," Susan


Comment by marykay9 on 11/24/10
I wish you would write more stories.  I love them so.

Marykay


Comment by ashley on 09/22/10
my dear girl , I just love these types of stories. Great !!

Comment by juliej on 07/04/07
a good short story but a booss who is so frendly after catching some ome in her dress etc to easy by half

Comment by Bobbie on 02/16/07
Gloria its been too long.  Please come back from your trip and continue with the House sitter.  Please Pretty Please.

Comment by Kathryn   Howard on 12/19/06
I just loved this some authority but, not heavy either. Its almost like he is being led along ( willing though ). The clothes sound good enough to wear my self ( in fact I wish I had them )lol. I suppose I must ask for part 2 please.If its as part good as part 1 you will have a solid winner in my eyes.

       Hugs & thanks

            Kathryn.


Comment by Bobbie on 08/27/06
This was a remarkable story and as others have said so wonderful
not to be overly abusive.

Please please follow up with the return of the Boss.

I will be looking forward to it. Don't leave us waiting too long.

Thank you.


Comment by juliej on 08/13/06
an interesting concept for this story well written and well described i could not get over how his bos helped him maybe more should be written about this well done

Comment by fregen on 08/12/06
Gloria,

Thanks for writing again.  Having now read all your stories I hope that you continue to write.  The dominant but not abusive female is a nice change from the usual.

Thanks for sharing


Comment by Rose on 08/12/06
Hi Gloria,
What a great story and what I hope will turn into many more.

Luv Rose.


Comment by marsha on 08/12/06
very good ,now hat do we have for the next part ,and i hope there is a  next part of this story



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