zkiPZD There is noticeably a bundle to know about this.  I think you made certain good points in features also.

Excellent and very erotic stories, I was continously excited... I can't wait for the new stories to see what Allie and Mike has in store for sissy willow.

I loved this story - I wish my wife and her lover would treat me like the sissy cuckolded slut I so want to become. I want to lick his cum out of her pussy and suck his cock until he cums in my mouth and be abused like Willow....
Cindy

Willow,
Just enjoyed your story so,for several reasons that brings back some memories for myself.  At a much younger age, was found out (discoverd), by then a babysittter that enjoyed taking our secret to teasing and  taunts to gain her dominance over  me.  The more I, and we dressed and prissed the more I wanted and the more I lusted for acceptance of my feminine feelings.  I for one would have loved to have been in that same situation of submission and servitude.
Lovely  story and  your thoughts as it did  bring so many thoughts of erotic times  back to mind.
hugs  and hopefully more to come

so very well written all was explicit please write more. it's hot!
you have talent.

just fabulous!!!!!!!!!!  more, please!!

Wonderful story I have been their and experienced it. Wonderful Carol

Having a life long fantasy about being a sissy  this type of story was wonderful and generated the met need to relieve myself 5 times from part one to the last part   not all read at once.   BUT and this is a big but   I just can't get into unbridled cruelty or pain.  that part left me cold  I have had mild s and m  and though erotic it did nothing for me sexually   I would like to have seen more of the cuckolding sissy  serving   ( maybe eating out his wife when she was done with Mike) or perhaps a mild toilet sissy   The poor sissy already was licking his wife's rear end   so why not let him satisfy mike too?  and I am always hot after reading where a woman forces her sissy to taste her golden champagne   of course I won't be satisfied until you let this new sissy get the thrill of being given hormones and watching his body slowly change  to his secret desire to be more feminine     but HEY I LOVED THIS WHOLE SERIES  

a true lovr story that all TV/TS/Sissy would love to be part of

Great story.I got really hot reading it and hope you continue it soon.

Very interesting Story Guess these things do happen usually over a
longer period of time.
One minor comment not about the story but of a previous comment.
Pink as were the panties first item second Bra and finally matching
slip. Did I read a different story than Ami.
Looking for this type of story using search I suppose should expect
a bit of ruffagy however suspect it really was pushed forward a bit
too quickly even though being planed for quite some time.
Perhaps had I been Willow and even though apparently enjoying some
or part of the experience, there would have been some consequences
experienced by the perpetrators.

really enjoyed your story. hope you come back and continue it.

While I agree with the others that the descriptions of both the vloths and feelings could have been lengthened, it was still a wonderful story that got me hot.

In sum it is a great erotic story!!  Keep up the good work.

SS

   Excellent story theme.  Does what most should, but don't.  As in previous comments it could use a little more detail but all in all goes where it should.  More affection from the wife would help as a continuity device

Overall, a good, erotic story.  There a little much pain for me, but some people like that.  The only problem I have with it is that everything gets really intense a little too fast without any real transition.  But it should work for an audience who is strictly looking for sexual content.

I would like to see a bit more description of the clothing, and perhaps a little more extensive transformation of the husband.  The line that reads "The bra was also pink..." in the first chapter comes without anything else being described as "pink".  You should probably consult an editor, as these are the types of things they can catch that an author usually doesn't.  The authors may know what they wanted to say, but sometimes it isn't clear to the reader.

Either way, keep writing.  Your stories are appreciated.

-Ami

Lovely beginning.  Well written and on an excellent theme.  I'm eagerly looking forward to the next episode to see what Allie and Mike have in store for Willow.